Working Mothers in America

I really like the colors that you have on your site and the organization, but I think that you could use a little bit more on the variation between sites and also maybe some more pictures and other media in order to spice it up a bit. Some parts also don't work, but you know that and I'm sure its just a technological issue, especially on the affects on children page. I also liked the fact that your website is very simple, but it seems like you have a lot of extra space in which I feel like there could be some points where you would be better served adding a little but more writing. The fact that you added some places where you can find some of the employers who work towards your goal , but it would be good to jsut make sure that all of those top ten that you listed are linked to the actual companies homepage. Also, just make sure your writing all makes sense in the form of this hypertext essay, because some of it seems just a ltitle bit out of sync with other parts, like in the taking care of yourself section. All in all, I like your site, it just needs a little something to really grab the attention of the reader, be authoritative and bold. Some big headings, maybe some inspiring photos, would be very helpful into making your site and eye-catcher.