Quick notes:
-the coloring of the text is sometimes hard to read bc it is too close to the background color
-good use of pictures. they are powerful and illustrate your points
-your navigation bar moves around which can be confusing...especially when it is at the way bottom of the page
-unfinished pages
-good how can you help page...way to motivate the reader
-i like your media page- good point to make- interesting story
-nice connection to personal experience
-better organization of text- split it up so its easier to read..the information is good!
in all, great job, good idea. i think this is an issue that is taboo in our society that needs to be brought to light..well done!!
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