17 October 2007

What causes a poor work ethic among student-athletes?

I like the subject and the writing on your website. You have a very interesting topic that is salient to many college students. However, the one main problem I see is when I open your window and try to navigate to the different pages, only one paragraph has linked words. Also from what we learned from class today it might help to break up your writing. I think you writing is very well done and is worth reading- so if you make it more reader friendly you can make a larger impact. Maybe you can add an interview or a study about student athletes to bolster your argument Maybe some more images.

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