The strongest part about your web-page is the consistency of navigation. No matter which page a person views, the navigation tool-bar remains stationary. I think your strong points are good amounts of information and your own personalized opinion.
I liked your hypertext homepage because it really grabs the attention of the reader. That effectiveness is kind of lost, though, when the reader is forced to scroll down to get to the different pages on your website. Consistency of navigation on all the other pages makes me think that the same format would work on the homepage.
Your essay suffers from a lack of pictures. You have a lot of black, empty space that's punctuated only by bright pink writing. I feel that your site would appear less empty and more calm with the addition of a few pictures. I realize pictures about internet communication are few and far between, but maybe you could find logos of major internet-communication providers. Just a thought.
Good luck!
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