17 October 2007

"Make-Up"

Your hypertext page is very cohesive and easy to use. I like the formatting of your navigation, especially the diagonal 'main' navigation. The links embedded in the text work very effectively. The color scheme is unique and effective as well.

I think your site suffers a bit from lack of imagery. The color scheme would support almost any color of picture, and I believe you'd much more easily get your point across about the hassles of make up if you, say, had a picture of a disgruntled made-up girl.

I like how you talk about why girls wear make-up. I can't really tell, though, whether you're opposed to the application of make-up or not. I know you say it's expensive and a hassle, but would you prefer there was no such thing as make up?

I also feel like you're missing out on talking about the issue from different points of view. Maybe you could find information about how make-up artists feel, or talk about make-up in the fashion industry or in television.

Good luck!

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