Pros:
- Intro page is very minimalistic which is good.
-The home page has a good synopsis of the rest of your ideas and pages.
-The design and usage of flash buttons is very effective.
Improvements:
The design of your page is very effective. yet, it would be helpful if you revised some of your content to explain HOW our concept of success has changed with reference to the American Dream. You have set up many definitions and explanations that are important to your point but you have yet to have an actual stance on your topic. I understand that you are not completely finished but I wanted to point this out anyway. it seems that you have spread a lot of text over many different pages. Be thinking of ways to make your text more interactive. Also, be thinking of way for for your readers to get involved in your topic.
Good job!
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