Make-Up

Great job on your hypertext essay! I loved your design and your navigation was very easy to use. I just have a few suggestions. In terms of the look, I think you need to add relevant images to at least some of the pages. If you include pictures, your audience will be more captivated and more likely to continue to read your essay. Inside your essay you include many incoming links which are very useful, so that is good as well. Overall in your essay you mostly say just your opinion on how make-up affects those who wear it and the people around them. It would be great to get more viewpoints like the opinion of the big make-up companies. Also, when reading your essay I hear a lot of your voice. Perhaps you should include some quotes from other perspectives and maybe an interview with someone you know who has been affected by wearing make-up.