17 October 2007

Society's desensitization to the demeaning titles frequently used to describe women

I think you have a good topic that a lot of women would be interested in. Your design choices are very nice for a topic about women. Your title is very gripping and will get a lot of people to glance at and then read your website. Your writing is very interesting and I am sure will be turned into a great linear essay, however I feel like a few things could make it a more effective hypertext. You could have links to all the pages avalible to the readers at all times. Some of your pages just have essentially a "next link" which makes the reader forced to go through page by page. With some tweeking of that and some more links within the text I think your website can be fun, informative, and easy to navigate. Good Job!

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