Social Consequences of Internet Communication

I think your subject is very interesting and relevant to our internet-obsessed world. I agree with many of the points you made about how this internet culture is affecting us. You also have great vantage points besides your own. There are a few things to improve on however. Your hypertext essay feels more like a linear essay, but split up into sections. You need to add more incoming links inside your text and perhaps split up the text more so that your paragraphs are not so huge. For example, on your "Outside Perspectives" page, you have 2 large paragraphs, no pictures, and one link to the "Who's Affected" page that you already linked to in the previous page. It would be great if you also included different types of media, such as the actual interviews with the two subjects, or maybe just direct quotes from them. Overall, great job though!