You have a VERY effective site.
Good Things:
- The introduction is very clear and concise
- I like the design of your site
- use of different colors and font sizes
- research is effective
-Personal story is applicable and relevant
Improvements:
- You have an obvious stance here and alot of your opinions come from your own experience which is good. Yet, it would be interesting if you had some links to other research and opinions.
- what are the real world applications of your project? How can people become involved? How can we change the way people view this issue?
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