Only Children

Great hypertext essay with a very nice design! There are only a couple things to work on. For starters, you need to read through what you have written because I found a few typos that are easily fixable. Also, you need to fix the links that go nowhere because this becomes confusing for the reader trying to navigate your essay. Next, it would be great if you could un-stretch some of your pictures so that they fit inside the table they are in. As far as the writing goes, you include great quotes, in depth information, and outside viewpoints. So basically, great job! If you fix those minor website details, I think your hypertext essay will be complete!