17 October 2007

The Value of SCU

Your first page is clear- the reader knows exactly what you are going to be talking about. then when we start going through the pages we go along with you and what you think about the value of scu. I like how you include a parents point of view but i encourage you to invesitgate more, see if you can actually publish the interview in Q-A format. I like how you give us your point of view, then the schools, and then the parents. you cover all the bases. but maybe see if you can interview a company that tends to hire scu students upon graduation- ask them what is it about santa clara students that make them so successful. i think your site is off to a great start- you have a good mix of text, video and pictures. but i encourage you to continue adding text along the way. good luck

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